Gazing out...

by Polly   Jan 4, 2006


Gazing out into the world,
the cruel wind seems icy to my spine.
What a beautiful, beautiful world this is,
for a moment all around is mine.

I'm wishing to myself, I were one of those people
who write of their wondrous life.
"Always concentrate on the positive,
and forget all of your strife".

I know I'm loved, you don't have to say so!
I don't need to know someone is thinking of me now...
I love this world, maybe even my life?
I'd any day rather smile than frown.

But if I need help, should I be ashamed to ask,
and keep it to myself, hidden, deep inside.
That's what I've always done in the past.
I'm ashamed, I don't want to confide...

To the people, who tell me how silly I am,
I really don't know how to win.
'Cos if I told you how bad I'm feeling,
you'd simply say "it's a passing thing".

- You'd say "don't worry all will be fine",
But I'm scared it's going to happen a second time.
I've been there, done that, got the scars,
and now I want this life to feel MINE

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tainted Beauty

    Polly,

    You are a very talented writter, i always enjoy reading your stuff, and this one was just as good. but it's so sad that you can't let go of the past and be happy:( I wish you luck with that. I hope you'll be ok.

    --Steph

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    But if I need help, should I be ashamed to ask
    [Loved these lines]
    I'm not sure the title fits though... But maybe if I read it in a different light it would...
    But this was a really good poem... Definately how I feel most the time 'I know I"m loved' all that .. Yeah.. Nicely written.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by LockedInEternity

    Im not sure about the title, but the catagory is perfect!!
    Really interesting poem! I enjoyed reading it. Somehow the rhythm seemed a bit off though, but maybe thats just me:)
    Anyways your a really good writer!! Keep it up!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by amber

    I like it good job it is wonderful keep it up you are talented

  • 18 years ago

    by 111308

    Wow I Loved This Poem! Its Great And I Think Everything Is Fine About It! Thanks For The Advice On My Poem I Appreciate It! I've Never Done Poetry In A Class Or Anything So I Dont Know Much About It So I Just Try To Write It The Best Way I Can I Was Hoping To Take A Poetry Class Next Year But They Cancelled It So I Dunno, I Cant Really Show My Poems To Any English Teachers Because They Will Think Im Suicidal And Stuff So Any Help I Can Get Is Appreciated Thanks If You Ever Need Someone To Talk To Or If You Just Want To Talk To Me You Can Always Email Me At XodecembershhoX@yahoo.com Or If You Have Aim My Sn Is
    xbr0k3ndr3amzzx
    5/5
    Love Steph*Xbr0k3ndr3amzzx*

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