Wow! This is a beauiful and yet so very sad poem. But like you poem say's, your the only one who can control your life and no man can ever bring you down. Good job! Keep it up!

Really good poem.i liked it alot my favorite poem so far is still bitter sweet but this is right behind it in my second place. i'm about to finish another one of mine here pretty soon so once i get it on here i'll tell you well see you tommorow