Comments : Sister (Revised)

  • 18 years ago

    by Gesselle Valle

    :-) Sweet and Touching Poem Bill (-:

  • 18 years ago

    by Lu

    Beautiful touching poem for your sis....Bill
    This piece truly shows your love and respect for your sister ...
    Truly heart touching , my friend

  • 18 years ago

    by Bill Turner

    Yeah, right.....

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    This is amazing Bill... SO very heartfelt, so much love. Very good Bill, and what a great revision too!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    A very heartfelt and beautiful write...

    Love Ann

  • 18 years ago

    by JJ

    I remember commenting on this poem once before... heartfelt and sweet write for you sis. their is nothing I adore more then the relationships between siblings. I don't think I'd be able to live without mine. great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Rozzy

    I love it! aw i miss my sis. good write, i enjoyed reading.

  • 18 years ago

    by Sienna

    Im havin a fight with my sister right now. it makes me realize how much she means to me. good poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by melinda

    This poem is so good. i feel the same way about my sister, i live with her! lol! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Lynne

    This is a really good poem. It makes me feel that much closer to my sister. great writing 5/5 :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Jaklynn

    Sweet. Makes me wish i had a sister.