I'm not sure if your talking about your own grandfather, but I presume you are. I can only imagine the pain your going through...it must be hard trying to love someone that won't or can't love you back. my father and I were never close and it bothers me a lot but I know that he loves me and I'm sure your grandpa does too.

Heartbreaking! You convey this with so much raw emotion, well done! I also like the whole "blooming hope" thing and the last line, so sad.
Take care and keep it up~Holly

Aw sad. :(
Great poem though.
good luck on your exams btw. :)

I found a spare-second.
I love yah sweetheart.
Keep writing because you are an absolute inspiration to many poets.

Love you forever and ever.

xx
Kalah.