Comments : Typical Day

  • 19 years ago

    by xDryTearsx

    WOW!!!
    The imagry was amazing
    so much detail
    This wa an awsome poem!!!
    I loved it soo much
    your soooo good.

  • 19 years ago

    by midnight♥lullibys

    I love your poem!! its perty!!! i love this line:
    Rain drops dessiminate against the cold ground
    b/c i dont know what it means lol sounds kinad deep or intellifent lol great job