The Enevitable End

by Allison   Jan 5, 2006


The darkness surrounds me
I feel so alone
I'm in a terrible world
And I want to go home

Theres no good left here
As I look all around
What has this world come to?
No one makes a sound

I walk an old path
No ones here for me to see
I look at the brown grass
And the dead, lifeless trees

The rivers are dry
The lakes are all brown
This worlds about to end
Everythings falling down

The circle of life
Has come to an end
Natural selection has picked us
Its no longer our friend

Our destruction comes closer
With each passing day
Theres no way around it
So accept it and pray

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  • 17 years ago

    by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm

    I liked this one!! it was refreshing. well done bub

    much love and many kisses,
    bex

  • 18 years ago

    by Stabbylou

    Fantastic! The imagery in this is mind-blowing, it's an intelligent, awesome read. The structure is perfect, I loved this one, probably my favourite poem in a while. I'm jealous that you can write simply yet so well :p

  • 18 years ago

    by *~Emma~*

    I don't know if you're still looking for a title or not, but i think the one you have fits perfectly! you've done an awsum job with you choice of words! well done!...........luv em

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    This is really good.

    I'm not too good at titles either... errmm...

    the enevitable end
    engulfing darkness
    the end of our days

    idk.. i really cannot do titles lol

    the poem itself though is great.

    5/5

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