This is really good.

I'm not too good at titles either... errmm...

the enevitable end
engulfing darkness
the end of our days

idk.. i really cannot do titles lol

the poem itself though is great.

5/5

I don't know if you're still looking for a title or not, but i think the one you have fits perfectly! you've done an awsum job with you choice of words! well done!...........luv em

Fantastic! The imagery in this is mind-blowing, it's an intelligent, awesome read. The structure is perfect, I loved this one, probably my favourite poem in a while. I'm jealous that you can write simply yet so well :p

I liked this one!! it was refreshing. well done bub

much love and many kisses,
bex