Poem i wrote for school, it kinda sucks

by *~Katie~*   Jan 5, 2006


A well-informed teenaged girl.
With a smile on her face and nothing more.
An old-fashioned lullaby, she sang to her core.
Peace-loving and commitment will always be her lore.

As a matter-of-fact she was only 16.
With problem-solving she was always
keen.
Being world-famous was always a feen.
Much-improved she soon became.

Far-reaching but never vain.
The thirst-quenching success seemed so feign.
As did everything else up-to-the-minute of fame.

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  • 18 years ago

    by DevilWithin

    I like this alot very nice, xoxoxox Rach

  • 18 years ago

    by jessi

    I like the effective words in this poem a bit big for me lol but i liked it hun xxx jessi xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by BrokenMisery

    Not bad. The style was a bit edgy and it had a bit of a disrupped flow and meter with some words i didn't even know existed :P. Well it gave me a break from the standard poem styles which is refreshing but try to make it flow a little better.

  • 18 years ago

    by InvisibleGurl

    Hey Katie!
    I actually quite liked the poem, especially the lines:
    The thirst-quenching success seemed so feign.
    As did everything else up-to-the-minute of fame.

    Nice.
    Keep it up!
    Laterz,
    Shirlz.

  • 18 years ago

    by Polly

    Great poem. keep it up
    polly

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