by Ariana
This is really excellent - you have so much in such a short piece. I like the almost cynical tone to it - 'why do you play your mind games' sounds almost sarcastic and uncaring, yet obviously you do care and this is shown as the poem continues. This is a really good description and portrayal of those little moments we all have when trying to figure out the actions of the opposite sex! Brilliant write! |
by RetroRavey
I didn't like it so much... so I gave it a 4... |