This is sooo sad and touching plz keep it up uve got talent

Wow.this poem is really deep.i REally like it.keep up the great work.and if you get a chance check out some of my new ones. thanks..great poems!

"But I wish wishes came true and dreams could be real,
Because if they did, I'd get better and be happy with the way that I'd feel.
But I guess this is reality and there's just nothing I can do,
I just wish I didn't wish my life wishing wishes came true"

The last line was genius!
5/5
*Gem*

W0w thats sooooo good!!! my dad has diabetes !!! anyways really good poem i love it!!
love always
aLi

p.s. thanks for the comment on mine!

Hey, great poem, flow and rhyming are once again really good, well done, dont let it get you down, you CAN come out the other side.
Love Mel

Wow great poem! You really are good at writing poems and probably other things since you like it and all. I'm the same, love writing, it became one of my passions. Keep it up, i love it!