Poetry is written from heart and not brain, thats what i always believed but poems like this always make me think twice, somehow i never managed to give it a try but piece like this creates that urge in me, great poem dear, very nicely written
all the best and take care
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Wow, this looks like a hard style to master, and you did an excellent job on it!
A very nice concept to use! Fab poem!
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*Gem*

Great job on this formed poem.Word choices are excellent. It looks as if you have mastered the style :)
Take Care Cindy