Reminds Me of You

I see a bright light (5)
Shining in the sky at night (7)
Reminds me of you (5)

You were a fairy (5)
Pleasure was priority (7)
Your magic so true (5)

You were like a star (5)
Known by all near and far (6)
Were loved through and through (5)

You were an angel (5)
Kept all away from trouble (7)
Your blessings so true (5)

Although you're gone (4)
Still your memories remain (7)
You are here to stay (5)

When- I see a bright light (6)
Shining in the sky at night (7)
It- Reminds me of you (6)

I went through it and bob is right some of the syables are off I hope that you can see this now though. Although I really liked the poem it needs some work with the syllable count in order to make it a real hiaku poem. Nice star though, with a little work this could be awsome.

This is so deep, really liked this one a lot...
not commenting coz i need same from u 2..i only appreciate when i mean it and i do no favors so take none.

take care and all the best

will surely read ur other poems too

Cool poem girl, that is totally awesome...I love it so very much...btw...wot is Haiku?

Excellent very good.

I know exactly what this feels like. sometimes i literally look up at a star and imagine that it is my friend looking down on me. great poem all around!!!