Oh My... Wow... Okay I dont actually knwo how else to describe it. It's sad but it's got a great beat and by the sound of it you got caught up in one of those moments where you couldnt stop writing. Hehe I get those but I that poem is one of the best I've ever read. It's just so powerful. I really love it. 5. I don't know if it's true if it is then I'm sorry. If you ever wanna chat my emails address is on my profile. Keep writing! Cause I'd love to read more fo your poems...
Take Care, Elle xxxx

And believe it or not I can speel :S you just caught me in a moment... honest... x

...*speel

....*spell!

Wow what a wonderful poem. Yet very sad. You gave this poem your all, and it shows. A lot of feelings in this one. A lot of pain. It really flows. Well done girl! Well done. Lotsaa love -xxx-

Congrats. It was good.

Strong,cut very nice...keep ritting u have potential

Wow, very sad poem, I felt your pain you were going through while I read this, I hope someday i'll be talented enough to right a great work of art like this 5/5 hands down!

Omg its amazing
i know excatly what it is about
i love it
its amazing
omg its so good
i hope u keep writing like this
cuz im adding u to my favs!!
greatjob
5/5

Really like your poem, it has so much feeling in it. Sad poems are the best kind