Damn this poem is so true. I too wish i had confidance! So many girls in my High school walk down the halls liek that. They never show for class either, yet they have that power of confidance around them that makes them "popular"...jeez! I want confidance and all but aint gonna be no Ho! lol!

Anyway your poem is great! there is only one part that i think you forgot to put....The part where you say:
"Who is she trying to impress" I think your suppose to put a question mark(?) at the end of that sentence cuz its a question.

Anyway other then that A-M-A-Z-I-N-G! =D Take care!

P.S. Don't worry about having or not havin confidence, you will in due time. Just don't let anyone walk all over you, have your own say. Pretty soon you'll be a voice and not just a sound. Think bout it! =P
~Luvz~
~Chica~
xoxo

Great poem, you wrote from your heart, never stop doing that. Confidence has an e not an a
Ho i think has an e on the end of it when talking about that type of ho

Keep strong, keep writing from the heart!