That makes me regret everything i've felt when my "heart was on the floor" it was very good... 5/5

This poem is great, reminds you that we all expiernce pain

Wow. So wise, because it's so true, we do all feel that pain, or at least will someday. and then we fall in love again, and the cycle never ends.
take care of urself..

i just saw this mistake and it threw me off so i thought id mention it..

"At it end you feel lost"
*its
with love,
>torn -x.x.x-

Hey, nice job on this poem, it hurts me soo bad to read this because i"ve just recently been through it... It's really good though, nice job...

This is good....we write kinda the same things...i love this poem...xoxo
xoxo
elissa