Very descriptive peice with strong emotions and well expressed.

5/5

Wow that is very well written it makes your imagination work...

Excellent job that is a wonderful poem
your a good writer
love always
tabby

Wow! that was a great poem. it was just great. i am speachless.
Emma 5/5

Excellent is the word i'd give for this...
superb
5/5
love
amy

Again the imagery was amazing. like all of it. AMAZING! i dont really like reading sad poems, so the content didnt really hit me except i could feel your anger which is great. good job!

Nice, fairly unique way of titling the poem. It fit well with the general message & flow.

Good job.

-Kate

Nice idea - very original. It flowed well (As poems in similar formats tend to flow nicely) And it made sense! Great write.

Peace. [Sole]

Wow! that was excellent! i love the how you describe the inside of the chest!! itz amazing! keep it up!
jessy
p.s. this was a verrryy long poem! lol :P

WOW....iM CRYiNG WRiTE NOW...SERiOUSLY... i CAN COMPLETELY RELATE TO THiS..iT WAS SO DESCRiPTiVE AND WELL WRiTiN...i LOVE THiS POEM!! 5/5
MUCH LUV
~CRYSTAL

Wow! that one was especially good bcuz i cood TOTALLY relate. that sounds exactly like my feelings a while back. anyway wow...gr8 work..again. 5/5
~*Who Cares?*~

This was a really long poem, but like a journal entry. It was full of detail, and it kept the reader interested. It was raw emotion and that made it really good.

I love this just the way youve poured it all out it makes it easy to read even if its long and hard to keep attention on it i liked it really good i could feel the emoting xxALLYxx

I gave this a five because the vocabulary and maturity exceeds so many stadards. However I have to compare it to molassas, or maple syrup. Its "sweet" but "thick"...Theres so much of it, its slightly a mouthful...Do you understand my maddness? You use these big words that make it good, but theres just so much that it takes the focus away from the poem as a whole, adn gives individual attention.

[PygmyPuff]