by [She.Falls.Asleep] Jan 5, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
I'm gonna help you cause you said I could, |
by Lenny
Wow, I really liked that, a few lines didnt flow quite right, but the message, the rest of it, the imagery! It was superb in all literary senses, I moved with the character, it was like I was there, and at the end when it snapped back to the reality, Magnifique! 5/5 Adding you to favs |
Hey, I liked it. Elle, keep writing. :) |
by Drew
Oh my god that was beautiful I am glad I read it. It`s very good |