I like that
there is alot of emos
its great
i love it
its interesting
i will definitaly give u a
5/5!!

Its a good poem!!! it jumps around a little, but the use of imagery is perfect for the style! all the people who wrote this must all be on the same wave lenght!

Great poem! the descriptions and imagery were v.good. 5/5 x

Hey Ashley I liked this poem the words and the way u used them was awesome but a suggestion for you..try rhyming some of the words it gives it a better flow..but besides that this poem was awesome...love Joclyn

This poem rocks
there are really meaningful lines I like that a lot
keep up the great work
5/5 from me
love
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Brilliant imergy and very well expressed.

you may want to have another look at the line "That I have found my myself caught in and cannot escape" though

5/5

Wow... realy good poem :0)