by Simon Hayes Jan 5, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
new love
Emptiness once again |
by Cuddles
Wonderfully written, Simon. I love how emptiness is personified and the mellifluous words. Each word is perfect. The words flow so smooth and the meaning is so deep. It's almost like a river. Beautiful write! |
by Angie
Deep and beautiful write SiE....... |
by Natalie84
What a wonderful poem...so sweet and beautiful. I love the way you ended it so simple...very nice touch...lovely write Simon! :) |
by Bill Turner
Beautifully written my friend. |
by Ann Stareyes
Simon, |