by Jacob M Parnell Jan 5, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
One last kiss... |
How sad... Although there are alot of poems similer to this, you have your own way of writing which makes them more unique and personal, I'm really impressed with your work |
This poem is beautiful....all throught it i was hoping none of it was based on real life. The rhyming scheme was great and i loved how you set it out!!! Keep it up!!! You're very talented!! |