Wow!! stunning poem! i loved it, i can really relate. excellent writing and the comparison with the bee to flower is really effective. 5/5!
take care hun xxxxx

Oh, Becky...

Please stop cutting. You know as well as I know that it's a horrible thing...I'm sorry that you do it. I know it's not your fault, but please, for the good things in life, look for help. You seem amazing, and I don't want to see you hurt from your response to hardship in life. Cutting is not the answer. Put down the razor, look at it, and throw it away. You don't need it. People love you. People need you. And you've got me here.

I'm so sorry.

Matt

By the way, great poem. *ends with smile.*

You can live without it Becky.

I have faith in you.

Becky this poem is just amazing.....it like like looking through your own eyes...This poem is showing everyone who you are...and not many people have talent like you do sweetie cuz you portray your emotions sooo well!!! My fave stanza was

i take this knife in my hand
and i feel the blood flow
i feel a gentle calm
it take me to that place

I got shivers up and down my spine with this one sweetie so keep up the great work = ) keep smiling

luv jess xoxo