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by NIKKI Jan 6, 2006 category : Dark, fantasy / dark, horror
At first my heart was only stolen but now it is completely broken he took it strictly for show i thought i really did know how he really felt for me but now i can see how could i have been so blind not to see what was going on behind his crystal blue eyes everything he said was all lies he said without me his world would shatter now what does that matter my heart is cracked and torn it was over worked so now its worn How could he hurt me like this what about after that kiss? i thought it meant something I guess it meant nothing so now i don't know what do i do my confusion is all because of you my tears fall like the rain your not worth all this pain so I'm ending all of this right now currents closing so take your final bow you where the one to cause this ending you and all your lieing i hold the knife in my hand death is all i demand cut real slow and deep without making a peep now i lie on the floor my life is no more
by Cries at Night
I am ssso liking the poem! Your use of metaphors and imagery is truly beautiful! it reaally draws the reader into the poem (well...it did me!)