I've been there your mom leaving you just standing. both my parents did it but not the same I can relate though

Its a very touching poem.

Touching, and emotional, feelings are expressed well. keep it up
love Tara xxx

That is a very sweet and heart-felt poem. Reminds of me and my mom. Nice job

Very touching. ur rhyming was exellent. well done. it flowed very well

Ruby

Excellent poem! very sad, but very well written! keep up your good work! take care.

Awww... that made me cry.. that was so sad.. im sorry if its true.. i love it.. the words seemed to speak 4 themselves
keep it up, girl
u rule!
Nouna