This poem has a very good meassage... i really liked it and how you wrote it... i flowed well and seemed true to the heart... i hope its not a true stroy, but if it is then you should probley let that person read this... it may help... nice job... and congads on a great write...

sammie

Very very good. some one i love wrote a poem like this that saved me. if its about somebody let them know, it may help. again very good

So sad

Thats freakin' excellent