I really liked this poem, every girl should read it. Great job!!

YAY for inner beauty! great message! really this is important and more people need to understand the meaning of this poem. some girls will be a lot happier in life if they just took the time to understand this poem and what it really means to just accept themselves and the happiness it can bring. wonderful poem.

hey i heard that the dollar strore put their shampoo on sale for 99 cents! so i thought at four we can hit them up and save a ton!

~Jacklyn :)

maybe we'll have to email each other again....

A message that most can relate to. The ryhming didn't seem dforced which is a positive.

Keep writing
Nici

Another good piece with well written description and flow.

keep writing
Nici

This poem really sucked me into reading it and i couldn't stop,
i love the way you can make your words flow so easily.

Wow this is an excellent poem you r a fantastic writer
keep writing
love always tabby

Very touching....good job.

LISSA

A wonderful write, i for one see everyones inner beauty, and well its a far better way to view life. "Fit" is overused and over rated... inner beauty makes everyone perfect...

I love how you have conveyed it..

And keep holding that inner beauty!

Jon
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