When I Told You To Go...I Wanted You To Come Back And Stay...

by christina marie   Jan 6, 2006


I can't stand it,
Being away from you,
I'm pacing corners of my mind,
Just wondering what to do.

Sitting on the sofa,
Wishing you would call,
So that you could catch me,
Right when I fall.

Wish you would call,
Oh, how I miss you so,
But I know that you had left,
Right when I told you to go.

Now I'm crying hard,
I can barely breathe!
I need you here so badly,
So that this pain will ease.

I told you to go,
But I wanted you to stay,
The way I feel right now,
Is definitely not okay!

If you would call,
Baby, we could make it right!
Tonight's going to be,
Another restless night...

But...when I told you to go,
You went far, far away,
But, I wanted you here,
And I wanted you to stay.

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It's not the best...
But it's something good...
Please comment or vote
& tell me what I can do to make it better. =)
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(C) Christina Hurley.
01-06-2006

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  • 18 years ago

    by limp

    :]
    thankyouthankyou. there was a huge daddy long legs. and the weekend should be now. cause i'm bored and I want the poem to read yeahh? lovelyyy.x

  • 18 years ago

    by Hey Brittknee

    Dudde i am very jealous u are really really good hun~loves britt

  • 18 years ago

    by SaveMe?

    Heyy thanks for my comment =]
    thats really cool i love rhyming poems =]
    im sure evrything will be alrite in the end with yoor dood =]
    loves alice

  • 18 years ago

    by Kyle

    Wow. great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Spanish Star

    I loved this poem. I think it was really great. No need to change it. Keep it up :)