Some very goodimagery inthere, i likethe idea of the journey and so on, sum of the linesin there were quite amazing! xxx

Descriptive, Dark, and over at excellent! lol Well done hunny! -huggles- I rea love this line

Ghostly children cackle and play, possession escapes their eyes,

w00t keep it up -hugs-

Love Always
Jenn

Wow this a great poem 5/5
and alaways keep up the good work.
Leona

Amazing Emma you've outdone yourself my favorite so far

great job

keep it up 5/5

I do not know what to say.

I am honestly speechless, and as I got further into this poem, my jaw dropped wider.

You are truly amazing, and I stand by my statement:

You are the best poet on this site.

Wow, Emma.

Matt

Oh my god. lol..
i think im as much in awe as our beloved matt here^^ lol.
Great poem hun, one of the best ive ever read.
you are so talented and ur poetry a bliss to read, i cant wait for more.
Take care,
much love
>torn -x.x.x-

Babe! i lluv this poem!! it is s0o0o g0od! u r s0 talented, i wish i c0uld help y0o but h0ld on babe c0z it wiLL get better, i will b here 4 u every step of the way, if u need s0me1 i will b ther 4 y0o!! luv maddy xxx

Awesome!...You're such a good poet, each time I read another of your poems I'm impressed and don't know if you could get any better but you always seem to!

So sad but so good..very different from your other poems but i love it

Yeah it's a whole new style, it is amazing, just so solid, read it ages ago but for some reason didn't comment. astounding stuff ham, truly xxx

Omg, the imagery was brilliant, this has got to be one if not the best poem i have read. i cant help it, im gunna have to go and read it again. great great poem.

You are so talented
i loved your wording
this poem was great
keep it up ....
emily xxxx

Hey! wow this is a brilliant poem!!!! such an excellent use of imagery throughout the whole thing! thankyou so much for commenting on mine, i really appreciate your thoughts
love
XxFeEBeDeExX

Thanku every1, ur comments mean so much to me. lots of luv,
xxEmmaxxx

I just joined this sight and i read alot of poems by other people and this is REALLY one of the best i'v read so far.WOW! it's amazingly specific and i love it!

Wow,this was an amazing poem..you have a realy great way of writing..thank you for all your comments you've given me.take care..all my luv mich x x

Thanku guys! :) xxxxx

Wow, that's incredible! Have you been to hell? Only, you must have done to write such an incredible poem about it!

This is awesome, no amazing, no stupendous, i would go on but i think you get the point. i love it, it flows nicley and i just love the story behind it. just great!!

Danielle

Wow this poem is amazing
you had so much imagery and desciption
i loved it
you sure got talent