It was a really good poem! 5/5*

Great poem, i love the imagery. i was definatly walking down there as i read it. 5/5 loved it

OMG!!!
All these poems r so amazing!!!!
Woah u have soooooo much talent!! u shuld send 1 of u poems in 2 a newspaper or sumtihing cuz these deserve being published
5/5!!
i love them all!!!
XXX
Clare**

Extremely well written, I'm here on behalf of PainofOne and my work "Porcelain Asylum" to which I'm glad you enjoyed. I came to see the talent you put out and I'm glad I came. 5/5 I can visualise this with ease.

I really liked this

Wow fantastic poem it is so dark and well written great job lots of feeling and emotion in it lol great job and thanks for the comment

keenan