Faking
by ReeneLou Jan 6, 2006
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Faking sleep so you won't see me crying pulling the covers up, you can't see me dying you leave and close the door behind you why cant you just leave me alone, you have to screw around with my heart head and body, and still you treat me like I'm nobody, if you ever see sense and realize just what you have, I'll still be here because I'm that kinda person no life, I'm lifeless no hope I'm hopeless, i could make you happy if you'd only make me first, i couldn't care if i live or die, i no know my life would be so much better if it were yours |
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18 years ago
by ReeneLou
This poem isn't based on personal experience but more on the feelings i have bottled up inside i know that one day i'll explode but till then i'm gonna keep writing in dribs and drabs anyway to all those out there who haven't commented please do or else!!! lol tohru
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18 years ago
by Stabbylou
Love the first too lines, absolutely great poem hun xxx
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18 years ago
by Stabbylou
Love the first too lines, absolutely great poem hun xxx
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18 years ago
by Erika
I like it, I've felt the same way before, no reason left to live, just keep pushing through, and sooner or later, you'll find out what you've been living for, god has a plan for you, liked ur poem though it was good
