Good Job!! I've been through that. Now my ex has become one of my closest friends!!

U can do better than this! i have read like all ur poems, as u prob see from my comments...and i have seen better ones! but i have a few like this that are just made up wen ur left speechless! hard 2 put words into a poem and make good sense! u r an amazing writter and have a gift!...that i want!...waaa

Sorry to hear of your loss.

Hey! I think that was a really good poem. Sad though. =) It was awesome. Cheers!