I like this 1 it was great very powerful loved it keep it up 5/5

Hm... I am not sure what to say. I liked this, the flow was pretty well, but it didn't seem to have a point until the very end..Nonetheless, great job.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex 5.5

Great job. The poem had sense of eeriness and growing intensity. Keep it up

Wow. that was a good one. 5/5.

This is cool. its not a short poem. not along one., and i actually like how you didnt break it up into stanzas.. it made the flow work very well. also i liked your rhyme scheme, it wasnt perfect. but i think it worked wonderfully for this poem.. i cant tell wh this has such a good rating.. your a great write..kepp it up. =]

This is very discriptive! I like it. My favorite part is the last couple of phrases! I like how it goes together so well. BTW thank you for the comments! Very much appriciated. I give you a 5/5

Wow very well written, flowed great to... very powerful and emotional.... 5/5

Kewlies poem! sorta makes me wonder a bit sorta....keep on writing!!

You have a very vivid way of writing. I really like it.

I loved this.
I thought it was really well written and the imagery was really vivid.
I enjoyed the rhyme scheme and I loved the wording.
One of my favourites.

Quite Unique in style. The flow was good and if you are referring to the 'new land' as your soul, What a wonderful concept. This was a really good write. Hope I interperated it right.

Good job
Jeannie

Veddy Good...lol i like it

5/5