My Sweet Inspiration

by Anna   Jan 6, 2006


Come down my sweet inspiration
And give me back my beloved leisure
I swear I pledge you my allegiance
Please take pity on this d*mb creature.

I live in a d*mn world of repetition
So tell me how can I not write the same
What do you say? stop condemning me!
Why do you say my excuses are lame.

My life contains just love and hate
About our f**king egoism nation
But I do my best to change myself
So please bless me my sweet inspiration.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Void

    Well, I saw alot of your poems are love poems, and they were just as amazing - your work blows me away time and time again; however, unfortunately something signs me out everytime I try to comment on love poems or poems about friendship -anything like that. I'm not sure what it is, but *sigh* I have to work around it. So I just wanted to thankyou for all of your comments, they made me quite proud of myself :). And of course, thankyou for writing so well! I admire you for writing in english too, and knowing so much - not only is that inspiring, but it's very impressive. I have tried to learn other languages and write them - and I just cannot do it. So... You Are Amazing! Hehe, keep up the great writing,and don't change a thing. I love your style, the unique things you say, the flow...The rhyme... It's all excellent work :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Raven Roth

    I likee. Keep it up. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Dean Russell-Rands

    Brilliant - I loved everything about it - it just flowed so well 5/5 =)

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