Brilliant - I loved everything about it - it just flowed so well 5/5 =)

I likee. Keep it up. :)

Well, I saw alot of your poems are love poems, and they were just as amazing - your work blows me away time and time again; however, unfortunately something signs me out everytime I try to comment on love poems or poems about friendship -anything like that. I'm not sure what it is, but *sigh* I have to work around it. So I just wanted to thankyou for all of your comments, they made me quite proud of myself :). And of course, thankyou for writing so well! I admire you for writing in english too, and knowing so much - not only is that inspiring, but it's very impressive. I have tried to learn other languages and write them - and I just cannot do it. So... You Are Amazing! Hehe, keep up the great writing,and don't change a thing. I love your style, the unique things you say, the flow...The rhyme... It's all excellent work :)