When I look at you
I see nothing but a lie
Because every time I dream of you
I dream of a perfect guy

Excellent lines. I love this poem. You did a great job with it. Keep it up. You surely get a 5/5

Good to hear from you again. Well I'm glad it was your past relationship. Hopefully you got over it. But for me, its my present. Cant hold on and cant let go. Anyways, thank you so much for your sweet comment. Looking forward to reading more from you. :-)

An excellent piece of work! I loved it.. Cos every line has a significance to it, and it flows really well... Good job! =) Check out my poems if u like.

I love tis one more ... i think you would like my poems we express similar feelings read "I WISH*" and "always in my eye" tell me what you think please