Very true poem. Alot of people never think of what could happen in the end. One little mistake could change the rest of your life.

It's good to see that you have tackled an issue like this through poetry and it works well.

Keep writing
Nici

Wow, i loved it. that's a great way of expressing this proble. we were just talking about that in health class! lol!

I really liked this poem. It was pretty expressive and i liked the theme. Keep on writing ^_^

Great poem. keep it up. read some of mine if u get the chance..thnxs. XXLISSA

Really great
The meaning is so good.
And its true with most girls who end up pregnant so young. great job.

True poem thats what makes it so good, it's so sad that such young girls are throwing there lives away.....Anyways good poem!

I really love this poem so true 5/5

Brilliant poem, my sister is in this situration at the moment.

this is written very well with a good flow.

5/5

OMG, I started cryin when i was reading this cause i was in the same boat, i was 19 when i got pregnant but never would i was it was a mistake, my son saved my life, if it wasnt for him i would have never have known i had cancer, but i very much so love this poem! it is so true! great job

5/5

Excellent work again, u have a wonderous gift. keep it up! this had so much meaning, it was oozing meaning. 5/5

This is another nice poem! yea sometimes a little mistake can cause alot of things

keep it up!