Great flow. Enchanting....I wanted to finish it so I could start again. Beautiful poem.

Wondeful! Very heartfelt... Beautifully done!

Lovely and beautiful poem. The flow was great! Take care and keep it up. Thank for sharing it with us.

E> Enchanting and melodic. You're too good at this, babe. You're fabulous with your words; so deep, powerful, meaningful and beautifu. You are incredible. I hope you had a good Christmas and New Year as well. Take care.

Much love,
Mortie.x.

HOLY MOLY!! I know I've said this a lot but I think this one is my favorite of yours. I say that every time you write a new one!

It's been a while since you posted a new poem so having this as your "come back" is just freaking amazing. This poem is definitely the shiz! You are an amazing writer! You have an imagination that just won't quit....I just read it again...looking for a favorite part or maybe advice I could offer...and nothing...I got nothing...lol It's perfect through and through.

I was confused though deary...I would really like for you to explain this...as I read I think of a loved one passing and you receiving a letter from him after he is gone or maybe just old letters...I don't know...but then the last stanza throws me off. Maybe I'm reading this ALL wrong....or maybe cupids dart is not a good thing in this particular piece...Coonay please tell me...lol You got my curiosity going crazy over here....

I seething with envy and jealousy here. seethe. seethe. haha i am kidding but it's an excellent poem and deserving of the accolade.

Renee....this is an awesome and beautiful poem...truly breathtaking.

love ya, Ann