You put a lot of emotion into this one and you can really tell that your in love!!! I hope you gave this to your girlfriend because if my boyfriend ever wrote me something like this I would melt!!! Great job hun

Aww this poem was just sooo beautiful...i bet your girlfriend loved every word of it = ) your words are always so magnificent and flow really well together. My fave stanza was

Perfect Looks Perfect eyes
Just got the Perfect Complexion
Just look at yourself in the mirror
you have the perfect reflection

So sweet, and i agree with *He has my heart* i would sooo melt if any guy would have written anything as good as this. Keep up the great work = D
luv jess xoxo

Wow.. that is such a good poem.. for you to care about someone that much, and be able to write the words down that well, I give you props, good job, another great poem. 5/5

Hi david this is your girlfriend on your computer, in your house, on your account and commenting on your poem i would log out and vote/comment/read (VCR) but i'm too lazy so im typing this long long long long comment right in front of you LOL love you sooooooo much!

**Muahz**
**Xo*Xo**
**Lolli**

Aawwwwwwwwww i think that its sweet you love her so much and would write so many poems(excellent magnificent poems) to her and i really like the dedication it was from the heart... youre an amazing poet and i really love reading your poems...
~Sandra~