You say we waited too long
Too long to make something right
Or correct something thats wrong.

I love how you used that line more than once, because it worked well with the poem. this is incredible, so I hope you continue to write!

I really like this poem!!!! you have talent girl!!!! KEEP IT UP!!!! thank yuo for the comment on my poem!!!!

Omg soo good of a poem!!! you are such na good writer!! keep it up girl!

WOAH! okay. This is one amazing poem... yeah. You are an extreamly talented writer. I really wish you had more poems on here... I already read all of them... and I really want to see more of your work... you are such a great writer! PLEASE keep it up!