Wow, wow, i don't know what to say. this poem was seriously AMAZING. I pictured everything so detailed and made me cringe this was soo good!!!
I loved it, especially the part that said
"Pins and needles, pokes and scars, Eyeballs, fingers, intestines in Jars. The laughter is piercing and screams out my name, here comes the watcher and here comes the pain.. Deeper and deeper, cut to the bone. Flesh leaves my body but grows on it's own."

Bonjour i am Adam one of Alissas best friends, i really liked your poems and the angel twist at the end. Although it did get a little corney at times you briught it back to scale. There were definatly words taht just dont belong and as i writer you need to learn how to use an axe and chop words out. Good job n keep writing