by VioletRaven Jan 7, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
I watched as your eyes sparkled in glee, |
Wow. very well written and great imagery. I really liekd the way that u ended it, it was just a perfect way to put an end to a really great poem. Keep up the gd work! |
I see where this came from, i habe and still do cut, i dont want to but when your life sucks as bad as mine u start to stop caring, but yea, i really liked this poem and don't want you to stop writing |
"Hard to find the way back" so true, and so sad, well done, that was brilliantly expressed, but did it never make you feel better? I know it's so wrong but nobody can really explain why, and it's better than doing drugs isn't it? Thank you for expressing that so well, and thank you for your comments on my poems. |
by The Wingless
This is really good. And I agree with Mel, if this was a reality, it would be pretty scary. I can't believe you made such an awesome poem froma a dream, I can't even remember my dreams most of the time when I wake up, lol. Haha, like always, this poem was awesome, please keep up the good work. |
by Mel
Glad that was a dream and not reality! good use of language and imigary. Your'e a great writer! |