The boy who was shunned

by XxXcrystalXcontagiousXxX   Jan 7, 2006


The boy who was shunned now holds a gun.

As he walks down the street all the voices start to repeat.

Al he can think about who is first?

Everyone called him the ghost cause he was whiter than most.

now it was time but who should come first?

Maybe The cheer leader who treated him the worst she was pretty in pink but did he ever think what was on her arm?

What bout tom did he know his mom was addicted to drugs and alcohol.

As he walks the voices talk.

He walks in school and pulls it out by now they all start to shout.

His teacher say whats this all about.

Before he says more he hits the floor.

He thinks on no i hit the wrong person.

As he searches he finds the one person who he hated the most.

Bobby the boy who called him gay and made him afraid.

But Bobby was gone he ran crying and trying to save the teacher from dieing but with ever beat he became weaker.

He then realized what he had done all cause he was shunned he ended a life

So he put the gun to his head and pulled the trigger but he wasn't dead.

What had happened then he saw the teacher he was shot twice

finnaly he was pushed on the ground yet he made no sound..

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  • 17 years ago

    by Pesamenteiro

    It was good but I got kind of confused half way.It straightened out at the end.Other than that It was an awsome poem.
    Keep writing

  • 18 years ago

    by dancer

    Wow awesome poem u have a great style of writing keep up the good work 5/5
    xoxo
    allana

  • 18 years ago

    by LuVlYlUfFlY

    You have a gud talent use it coz its g8 lots of sad poems in there but u cant help wat u feel dont worry one dae it will turn owt for the best you jst gotta find someone to love and care for you im sure that there is alot of them owt there u jst gotta find the rite person try for someone like you coz then you can share everything with eachotha and u will both undastand wat eachother is going threw coz u feel the same but gud poem i loved it heaps keep it up can wait for the future 1s 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by InvisibleGurl

    Hey
    I liked this poem, loved the story it told, however maybe punctuation needs a clean-up :), and also in verses..
    Loved it!
    Laterz,
    Shirlz.

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