Hey
I liked this poem, loved the story it told, however maybe punctuation needs a clean-up :), and also in verses..
Loved it!
Laterz,
Shirlz.

You have a gud talent use it coz its g8 lots of sad poems in there but u cant help wat u feel dont worry one dae it will turn owt for the best you jst gotta find someone to love and care for you im sure that there is alot of them owt there u jst gotta find the rite person try for someone like you coz then you can share everything with eachotha and u will both undastand wat eachother is going threw coz u feel the same but gud poem i loved it heaps keep it up can wait for the future 1s 5/5

Wow awesome poem u have a great style of writing keep up the good work 5/5
xoxo
allana

It was good but I got kind of confused half way.It straightened out at the end.Other than that It was an awsome poem.
Keep writing