by InvisibleGurl Jan 7, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Lying on the bed. |
by trevlosgreat
Great it flows good |
Thanks for commenting, this was the first poem of yours that i've read so far and from what i can see, you're really good. :) |
by aimee
Its a beautiful poem and I wish I had half the talent like you, Its amazing |
by 111308
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by Sole
Very sad - the flow went well, and the structure appeared well though out. Powerful last lines as well. |