That was a great poem can u rate mine please? |
by DevilWithin
I like that one very nicely written, xox Rach |
by lostlllsoul
Wow awesome write!! |
Alot of emotions and you spoke you mind. |
by jessi
Hey i love it its amazing so deep alot of thought bin put into it:) keep it up girl xxxjessixxx |
by Emma
This was a very well writen poem....it kinda is missing something....i'm not sure what but it was really good...anyhow... |
by Sole
Very sad - the flow went well, and the structure appeared well though out. Powerful last lines as well. |
by 111308
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by aimee
Its a beautiful poem and I wish I had half the talent like you, Its amazing |
Thanks for commenting, this was the first poem of yours that i've read so far and from what i can see, you're really good. :) |
by trevlosgreat
Great it flows good |