by Unseen Exposure Jan 7, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
unexplained
Those eyes did penetrate every fiber of a once full being |
Wow! This is amazing. I loved the words you used, very poetic. :) |
by Wallace
Excellent poem, very well written. Keep up the good work. Check out some of my poems when you have the time. |
by Cuddles
The wonder of words was once upon a time you could never run out, but now I find that I am speechless. This is a brilliant write. |
by JL
Wow. This was amazing, you had my attention from the first line. Very vivid and powerful. i love it! take care XXXXX |
Nice work. I always love reading dark poems. They have to be pretty much one of my favorite kinds to read. Excellent job. |