Nice work. I always love reading dark poems. They have to be pretty much one of my favorite kinds to read. Excellent job.
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Wow. This was amazing, you had my attention from the first line. Very vivid and powerful. i love it! take care XXXXX
JL

The wonder of words was once upon a time you could never run out, but now I find that I am speechless. This is a brilliant write.

Excellent poem, very well written. Keep up the good work. Check out some of my poems when you have the time.

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Wallace

Wow! This is amazing. I loved the words you used, very poetic. :)