by Cheyene Jan 7, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
I miss you so much and I think how you were here one minute and the next your gone and now I sit here and wonder who you'd be today. It wwasn't?t fare cause you were too young to die and it's not fare cause you were taken away from your family and me so soon but at lease I know that you are up there looking out for your family and me. I know that even though your not here with me I can still talk to you about anything I need to. The one thing that I want tell you right now is that I love you with all my heart and that I miss you. |
by Cheyene
*cries,speechless* |
Um can u rate and comment some of mine please and that was a good poem |
I like your idea's for poems, but you should really make a form for your poems. It's like when reading them, you're just writing down what you think, but poetry is diffrent. Poetry s writing your feelings and experiences in a unique form so that all can relate and understand. I'd have to say that your best one is Love or True Love. You're really good with idea's. ^_^ |