I like your idea's for poems, but you should really make a form for your poems. It's like when reading them, you're just writing down what you think, but poetry is diffrent. Poetry s writing your feelings and experiences in a unique form so that all can relate and understand. I'd have to say that your best one is Love or True Love. You're really good with idea's. ^_^ |
Um can u rate and comment some of mine please and that was a good poem |
by Cheyene
*cries,speechless* |