by Drew Jan 7, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I have to write like your still here because it hurts too much to think that you`re gone. Why did you have to leave God took you way too young. You used to tell me I didn`t get you that I was to out of touch for you. Because I wouldn`t go down the road of drugs with you. Now I am left with the memories and songs I played for you. Something in your eyes told me lies to make me go away but if you only knew that leaving me didn`t change the way I felt about you. Here I am almost a year since you`ve been gone and I can`t move on. No one will ever make me feel the way you did so much passion so much pain I knew it couldn`t last. God I miss you so much all I can do is look at your picture and memorize your face listen to our songs and remember us. I hope that someday I will be able to move on but for now I`ll keep my memories of you and remember us. |
by Rae
So sad! I can really feel the pain here. And the acceptance even through the hard times. Don't lose hope! There is someone out there waiting for you as soon as you're ready to take that step towards healing and move on. Keep writing, its beautiful. |
by chris
You really touched me very good as usual |
by Ed
Thats such a sad poem, but brilliant as well. Keep it up ^_^ |