by Trying to find the words Jan 7, 2006
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
I honestly thought that if there was ever no more "us" that I would die,I thought if i ever lost you I would lose myself,You meant the world to me and if you left,My whole world would be gone..But now that your gone,I've finally realized how strong I could be,And if I can get through this,I can get through anything...... |
by Ashley Ann
Good job keep up the good work |
I really like this i do like your poems. This is so true i really can relate i love it, very very nice :] |
This is a lovely peice of writing, very heart felt i think! |
by FoundHim
This is a good poem....altho my thing is..put this is stanzas like mine...instead of a paragraph...all poetry looks better in stanza form i think...but thats jus my opinion...an thnx for your comment on my poem...i appreciate it... |